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very good! i, for one, could never write a limerck. rhyming and syllables are tolerable in my book, but never favored. just like a limerck is supposed to be, these ...

I’m stitching my soul together from the latest blow We try to share needles, but we know - it’ s never going to work I feel your pain And it’s ...

I’m smiling at the future with a full-forward “hello” And it has the nerve to smile back to me I’ve always favored symmetry, But never favored reason, Yet there’s something ...

Wow. I liked this one. The ending certainly was the worthiest part of the poem - somehow you have a way of making the most remincient and boring situations interesting. ...

hahah that was the whole point - i know it was overrused. eh, thanks, though - really. it did help me

I’m a desecrated Deflowered image of a soul I feel it slowly fading As I stand my solid ground The echoes are reverberating The truth will drag me down I ...

1) because it's wordy, add more line breaks 2) use "and" instead of "&" 3) delete the repeat of "memory" from the thrid paragraph otherwise, i LOVED the imagery and ...

i loved the rhyme and the rhythm and the entire fact that you could support a beautiful meaning within such a beautiful work of art with words. the use of ...

the rhythm died very early in the poem and the rhyme was very forced. and the calorie chart was utterly random.... the beginning and the ending were far better. you ...

i agree with the others - but i must also just include one more critic: A paper hmmm… Could it be? Something to place my terrible thoughts on without hurting ...

i certainly feel at a loss. i can't help but vouch for the other side, though - i believe this was a very good poem. i'm not particularly disgusted by ...

i thought the first stanza was beautiful, mainly this line: that this is the start of forever, all the way to the bitter end. the second stanza also caught my ...

oh yes haha i get it now wow i feel stupid us poets, looking too far into things deep apologies. according to what you said, though, this is actually quite ...

nevermind. my buddist friend just told me. amazing, really.

the title is great and really just sprouted a million meanings into my head. on top of that, the poem was wonderful. i was really sucked into the first three ...